Date: 2010-06-23 10:28 pm (UTC)
I didn't even know he was outside.


Ouch.

I made a bunch of edits based on your comments. Is it better now?

(And although I changed it to remove the second mention of Naie's eyes, now I'm thinking if I should make them somehow significant. Thanks for the idea. :)
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