I read through the whole thing. That says a lot about its ability to entertain! :D

Since the language used isn't something I'm good enough at to start nitpicking textual expression, I won't do that. (I think that sentence alone shows my lack of expertise. ^^')

If at least one of the boys is gay, hooray! Yes, I'm THAT lame.

Oh, yeah, you asked something..the lenght is good, I'd say. There's no such thing as a fully done script, but this is done enough. I wouldn't buy it, but I don't buy any books. I would request that the library would buy it for me to read, though.